Hey, that's one hungry slug! I love the subject here - slug hovering over half eaten leaf. However I think it would be more powerful if sluggie wasn't dead center - if she were more to the left, then perhaps that competing thick branch in the top left corner would be cropped out. I do love the light coming thru the leaves though. It gives the scene a delicate sense, and then sluggie comes lumbering thru it to add tension and intrigue.